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文章衔接手法恰当；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；作者在高级词汇方面还有很大的空间，还要注意单词拼写。
The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it From my prospective,life is to find your true love and embrace life,while it may covered by a great number of sadness and complaints.Nothing can prevent you persue your dream,as more eager you are to succeed,a great footstep forward you have steped already. When I was admmited into this unniversity, I was sunk in sorrow in vain.Nevertheness,I come to learn how to play guitar and do some exercises daily,feeling good and appreciating life.Sometimes,life can't present what we like,what we can do is to find beauty and struggle to achieve our dreams. Certainly,you should hold the brief that your dream is possible although ideal.What's more,spare no effort and adjust yourself continuentlly to fullfill.Life is friendly to everyone in different time,but the harder you are,the lukier you wil be.
