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作者能较丰富地使用高级词汇，但词汇量不大，且存在拼写错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。
The Dragon Boat Festival is a special festival for Chinese people to memory a great poet Qu Yuan who is loyalty to our country. At that time ,goverment held dragon boat competition to celebrate our festival ,a great award will be won by those people who are the first team arrive destination. In my viewpoint, i think it's meaningful to held dragon boat competition.Fistly.It's a festival mark in Chinese traditional culture .We uphold solidarity ,persistent spirit in boating by generation to gerneration.Secondly,both of us enjoy the harmony and happiness from the festival .Thirdly.holding an acctivity contribute to significantly to government keep a touch with citizen closely. In conclusion,we should inherit traditional culture by generation to generation.
