2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Dear Mr.Jiang Junhu, You have been highly recommended by several of our members as a speaker for the banquet that is an approximate six-day meeting of the Chinese Association of Red Cross. The place is Kunlun Hotel in Beijing and the time is 3 o'clock of September 6.The banquet is purely a social gathering.So we prefer a speech on an inspirational theme.I shall send a message to you which includes the topics that will be appropriate for the occasion. Please give me a reply at your earliest convenience that refers to the reward you want.As long as we have reached an agreement,I will send you more details. Yours truly, Zhang Wei