2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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A Beautiful City Of My Home Town I'm extremely happy to hear you will visit my hometown.This is you first time to china,so I will take you visit my home town and elaborate introduce its beauty. In the first place,we can visit the great wall,Because it famous for its spectacular.In the same time,it is a symbol of chinese people's wise,so I wish you can experience our plentful culture.In the second place,I will show the forbidden city to you,The reason is very simple.Due to the forbidden city is too grave and magnificent.Of course,if you come to here in autumn,I will take you visit fragrant hill in beijing,it well-known for its maple leaf.I swear to you must be like it. In a word,I wish I can show you kind of scence.I reallr hope you can come soon.