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作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累高级词汇，拼写错误也要注意；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
A Beautiful City Of My Home Town I'm extremely happy to hear you will visit my hometown.This is you first time to China,so I will take you visit my home town and elaborate introduce its beauty. In the first place,we can visit the great wall,because it famous for its spectacular.Meanwhile,it is a symbol of Chinese people's wise,so I wish you can experience our plentful culture.In the second place,I will show the forbidden city to you,The reason is very simple.Due to the forbidden city is too grave and magnificent.Of course,if you come here in autumn,I will take you visit fragrant hill in beijing,it well-known for its maple leaf.I guess you must like it. In a word,I wish I can show you kind of scenry.I really hope you can come soon.
