语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;很好的运用了从句,同时句法错误极少;文中能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强。
With the developing of the scient in the sociaty recently ,Internet plays a more and more important part in our daily life,including our inpersonnal communication.First and foremost,it is convient to start a topic whenever and wherever you are. In addition,it cost little time to find someone who you want to taik with. Last but not least,there are more chooses to express yourselves in different ways,such as,in the online discussion with many people and help them to understand you welll. Consequently,if we make good use of the Internet to communicate,it would help us a lot to commucate.
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