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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分63.0分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

In the society,It is common that the human resouce manager have the first impression on you through your appearance when you employee,but the apperance can not decide wheather you can be employed,what is important is your competent.As the saying goes:"It is unwise to judge a person by their apperance." Nowadays more and more people are absorbed in changing their appearance through hospital because the question of judging somebody by their appearance is quite frequent and serious.That is harmful for their body,so the consequence should end.If the mannagers judge somebody by their appearance,they may miss the competent people . In all,we should not judge somebody by their appearance,we can know the people by other ways.

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