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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:出生率和婴儿死亡率

发布时间:2013-07-05 15:58浏览次数:3954
要求:

The table below gives information about the difference between life expectancy and infant morality. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should

1、describe the difference between life expectancy and infant morality

2、possible reasons

3、give your comment

You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.

用户的作文(系统评分75.0分
评语:

若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

From the table above we can get the idea that life expectancy in the 1990s had raised a lot than in the 1960s and infant mortality in the 1990s had greatly reduced. The table shows living standards in China have greatly improved since 1960s. What makes our country so great changes? In my opinon, there are two reasons. Firstly,our country has achieved huge success in socialist mordenization. In the pass,many people suffered from hunger,cold. But with the development of our country, we have solved all these problems and most people lead a better life,so their life expectancy has improved a lot. Secondly, our government pays a lot attention on people's health. Since the foundation of the PRC, the government has set up a lot of hospitals and trained a great number of doctors and nurses. Every person can get medical treatment easily,so infant mortality has reduced a lot. I believe all Chinese people will have a better future.

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