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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8979[网页划词已开启]
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分80.0分
评语:

采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者在句法层面做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

In the society,it is common that the human resource manager has the first impression on you through your appearance when you employee,but the appearance can not decide whether you can be employed,what is important is your competence.As the saying goes:"It is unwise to judge a person by their appearance." Nowadays more and more people are absorbed in changing their appearance through hospital because the question of judging somebody by their appearance is quite frequent and serious.That is harmful to their body,so the consequence should end.If the managers judge somebody by their appearance,they may miss the competent people. In all,we should not judge somebody by their appearance,and we can know the people by other ways.

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