2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章层次较为清晰；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

In morden times , computer has played a critical role in our lives. It is an amazing machine that we used to play games , do some shopping and chat with each other. Computers have made our lives convenient. However,the things that bring the greast joy can carry the greast potential of loss and disappointment.It is hard to imagine that some people are dump enough to spend the most of their times sitting in front of the screen. Those people who are addicted to the computer are missing the point. In fact ,computer is just a tool.Computer could never be the subsitute of friends and families. The clear message is that we should get moving to make good use of computers. Only in this way , can we be ready for the challenges in the futuer.