2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

In modern times, computer has played a critical role in our lives. It is an amazing machine that we used to play games, do some shopping and chat with each other. Computers have made our lives convenient. However,the things that bring the greatest joy can carry the greatest potential of loss and disappointment.It is hard to imagine that some people are stupid enough to spend the most of their times sitting in front of the screen. Those people who are addicted to the computer are missing the point. In fact,computer is just a tool.Computer could never be the subsititute of friends and families. The clear message is that we should get moving to make good use of computers. Only in this way , can we be ready for the challenges in the future.