增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl. She has red lips and clean skin. She likes to wear red blouse and white pants. She has long black hair and bright eyes. She likes smilling .She is a easy-going girl. I like her very much.Her name is Kate Klarke.