加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
I have a new teacher.She is a beautiful woman.She is teaching us English.She has patience.When we ask her questions.She explaines to us patiently ,with a smile on her face.She has good temper.She never loses her temper.My classmates and I love her and love her lessons.Everyday,we can't waite to have English lessons.She has good voice.Lisening to her classes is enjoyable.