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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(47):给某英文报社写一封信

发布时间:2013-08-02 17:04浏览次数:549
要求:

假如你叫李华,请给某英文报社写一封信,反映如下情况并谈谈你的建议。


1.现在有许多同学使用手机,原因一是认为时髦,二是认为便于同家人和朋友联系。
2.一些学生把手机带进教室,课堂上的铃声影响了课堂纪律。有的同学还在课堂上发短信,浪费了宝贵的学习时间。


建议:……


注意:

1.信的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数;

 2.词数:100字左右

 3.所有内容必须写在方框内,超出部分不予计分。


Dear Editor,
I'm a senior high school student.Now many students use mobile phones.
 
 
 
 
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
评语:

学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用。

用户练习作文:

The Classmate of Mine When I began the life of my middle school, I was introduced to Lan, the classmate of mine. His friendly and warm expressions made me like him at once. He is of medium height and weight with twinkling eyes and short, straight hair. In addition to, he has not only a fine-feature face, but also a broad nose, which catch a rich variety of girls' eyes. In spite of this, he isn't self-important in the slightest. He is an extremely generous person, although he tends to be rather lazy. For instance, he frequently buys something for me when I need, such as pens, water, foods and so on. As for his lazy, he never gets up early on weekends, even on school days. The most important reason I like him is that he is the most polite person I know, because he constantly smiles at the person he knows, even the person he doesn't know. What’s more, Lan is optimistic. He normally faces the problem happily instead of complaining about the world. And he is fond of telling jokes, which make people around him happy the whole day. No matter what the personalities he has, Lan is a reliable classmate in my mind, who always plays a wonderful role model for our classmates.

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