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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12897
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分73.0分
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简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

The communication with computer is right or fault On the modern time,with the internet developing extensively,the lives of people have changed easier and easier.Meanwhile,the more questions are coming.The major question is using the computer to communicate with parents and friends.Therefore,some young people imagined whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. We must admit the fact that electronic communication can save our money and we can not go home.But it is right?If we think the feelings of our parents.If we can control ourselves and make use of computers.Whether we are lost in it. In a word,whether the internet are best.We should go home to visit our parents.In my opinion,every coin has two sides.So we should make use of time and internet.

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