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作者句法知识扎实，但文中从句数量稍显不足；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
University is a magic place, where we can not only acquire knowledge,but also meet new friends, learn some useful skills and perfected our own personality. For one thing,we can acquire a variety of knowledge and learn useful skills. At university,we must take many classes, where we can get knowledge of books. In addition,we can get knowledge from library on our own as well. At university,we can take part in different kinds of activities and students society,in which we can learn some useful skills. For another thing,we can make more new friends in college. University life provides a bigger platform for us to meet other people. For example,we can attend different activities or students societies and meet different people,and then get good relationships with some of them. What's more,university life has a great influence on our personality forming. University life is more colorful and complex than high school life,so we will face different kinds of problems and difficulties. And in the process when we deal with the problems,our personality will get perfected. University life plays an important role in our daily life. Therefore,we should try our best to catch the chances to study at university and value the time at university.
