拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨。
When it comes to "happiness", the first explanation may be "pleasure", "wiliness" and etc. But as for me, it should be "problem". The happiness that in the consequences of solving problem, should be the most concrete and the most satisfactory one. From where I stand, I am a student of Computer Network, which was distinguished as one of the most difficult subjects to master. You should do experience around the clock unless you want to leave behind. Except me, I enjoy myself in the major. Once I got a bug, some kind of excitement went out from the deepest part of my mind. I nearly can't wait to figuring it out, and a sense of happiness shows out when I solving it. As for me, to solve a problem happily, a stubborn heart is necessary. You can't make out anything without insisting. What's more, if you see everything in a positive way, you can be successful quickly.
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