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In China,there are five famous mountain,which were called wuYue.HengShan is one of it and locate in my hometown.If my foreign friend is going to visit my hometown,the first place I would like to take him/her to see is HengShan. AS a famous mountain,HengShan not only possess beautiful nature scenery but also have great culture background.Summer is the best season to visit HengShan and visitors can view beautiful smoke.meanwhile,it is a good place to avoid hot summer season and feel cool wind.Besides,there are many temples in HengShan.Visiting HengShan,visitors can learn temple culture and view great temple.And most of people desire to express their wishes when they are visiting HengShan.It is believed that their wishes can will come true in the near future. Above all,HengShan is the most attractive interesting place in my mind,I want to take my friends to see it.
