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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
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可适当增加从句的使用;可适当增加高级词汇的使用量;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

An English saying goes like this:Don't judge a person by their appearance.What it wants to reveal to is that we should not judge a person by the look. No one can deny that people's appearance is so misleading that we should not believe it.For instance,several years ago ,duo to the nuclear leakage in Japan,a host of people went to buy salt, firmly believing that iodized salt could prevent radiation ,which was very ridiculous.In spite of one picture worths 1000 words ,some pictures cann't be trusted in this day and age,for PS prevailed all around world. As for me, from the above reasons,you can understand why it is unwase to judge a person by their appearance.we should raise our awareness of judging right from wrong rather than draw conclusions in a hurry.

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