2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；可适当增加几条从句。

As is shown above in the middle of the piture，people don't trust each other ，The great attention and abundant imagination among the public have been sparked and fueled by the picture above.Simple as the picture is the author intends to convey much more complicated and profound meaning than what we might sense at the first time. the picture tells that nothing can be compared with trust when it comes to the cultivation of individual characteristics.In no contrary other than China，it has been said，is this phenomenon more obvious.The public does attach due attention to importance of the trust.People all over the world,governments and international organizations stress the fundamental role of the trust. It is imperative that the essences be absorbed and drawbacks be neglected,during this process especially in the times of knowledge explosion， when the news，facts opinions even rumors have been bombarding us from ever corner of the world.Only in a reasonable,prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we hope to witness the scene in which people can enjoy the life to the uttermost.