高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；能够熟练使用从句并合理分配；文章词汇表达多样性不足，不过词汇拼写要再接再厉。

my homeland some years ago,my homeland is sistuted in which is around with green trees,bright rivers that fish swimming,houses narrow streets,the people work hard but poor and poverty. Now great changes have happened that high buildings and plants are build,all kinds of vehicles,enviroment became worse,the amounts of trees desend,the fishes dissapeared.so the pollution should be controlled.