2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文中词汇表达比较丰富，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文章层次较为清晰。

As we can see from the picture,there is a ship in the water and there are many rubbishes floating in the river which throws by the visitors in the ship.It is suprised that the shipper is indifferent on this.The picture is simple but it has significant meaning.The picture reveals that we should take actions to protect environment. With the economic development,people take more attention to enjoy themselves.But the phenomena such as the picture can be seen everywhere.In order to deal with the problem there are some measures.In the first place,the government should strength laws and regulations on it.The people who throw rubbishes in casual should be fined and condemned.Moreover,the visitors should improve awareness on environment protect.It is the most important to reduce the phenomennon. Everyone has the responsibility to protect the Earth where we lived.Only jointing by the whole society can we establish a harmonious society.