文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
I have many friends. Tess is my best friend. We are in the same class. She is also my neighbour, so we grew up together, Tess likes dancing and singing. She doesn't like reading and doing her homework. Every time I go to play basketball, she never goes with me. We always go shopping and swimming together. We share the things we have. We are best friends and will always be best friends.