2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；作者能较丰富地使用高级词汇，但词汇量不大，且存在拼写错误；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩。

Along with the warmth of global climate and width of global polluted regions ,how to create a green earth is incresingly important for our humanity survival.So it's our duty for our university students to create a green campus.A green compus is extremely vital for everyone and it has a giant effect our our healthy. A green compus is not only a green environment ,but also a green life habits and a green life attitude.For instance,we should ride a bike or walk on the compus instand of taking a taxi or by car. Certainly, we also have been suggested that we had better not throw the litter here and there and we are supposed to protect the environment from others. In order to construct a green compus ,The best sollution is making our effort to protect from polluting and destroying.