2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；作者能较多样地使用词汇，高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。

Along with the warmth of global climate and width of global polluted regions ,how to create a green earth is increasingly important for our humanity survival.So it's our duty for our university students to create a green campus.A green compus is extremely vital for everyone and it has a giant effect on our healthy. A green compus is not only a green environment ,but also a green life habits and a green life attitude.For instance,we should ride a bike or walk on the compus instand of taking a taxi or by car. Certainly, we also have been suggested that we had better not throw the litter here and there and we are supposed to protect the environment from others. In order to construct a green compus ,The best sollution is making our effort to protect from polluting and destroying.