文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;过渡词和衔接词不饱和,文章行文较为流畅;简单句偏多了。
There is a popular saying that good habits result from resisting temptation. I think the saying has much truth in it. Today,the pace of life is speeding up rapidly. Our life is changed. We are facing several kinds of temptation in daily life. there are games、money、power and so on. If we keep the good habits,the matters are succeed half. How could us keep