Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误。
The impact of the internet As is vividly illustrated in the picture above,the internet affact our life especially on learning,so lead to someone consider that the internet's information are always useful.However,in my mind,I supported the view which education not simply mean attained information. There are three reasons.First of all,sometimes,the Internet's information are negtive,if we realized it,which maybe makes us pessimistic.Second,if we acguire information from books ,we can better think and analysis questions to solve the kind of problems.Last but not least,the Internet's knowledge are litimed,so we obtain more knowledge only by school and books. As far as I'm concerned,we should rational use the internet to avoied bring troubles.