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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9027
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;高级词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒。

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The impact of the internet As is vividly illustrated in the picture above,the internet affects our life especially on learning,so lead to someone to believed that the internet's information is always useful.However,in my mind,I supported the view which education not simply means obtained information. There are three reasons.First of all,sometimes,the Internet's information is negative,if we realized it,which maybe make us pessimistic.Second,if we acquire information from books ,we can better think and analysis questions to solve the kind of problems.Last but not least,the Internet's knowledge are limited,so we obtain more knowledge only by school and books. As far as I'm concerned,we should make use of the internet to avoid in troubles.

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