小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

从句使用不足，建议增加长句和复杂句的使用；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；作者词汇表达不够多样，要注意单词拼写的检查。

My best friend is Lily. she is a beautiful and good heart girl. And we are sharing the same desk in classroom, we usually go to school together and leave together too.She do best in her study,and she is my private teacher in class off.She is so clever that she can make out any diffcult study problem I encountered.In that moment ,she can be patient with my ongoing bohtering.I hope we love each other forever. I believe that friendship endures.