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2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:58浏览次数:7192
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题目要求:

Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?

题目讲解:

报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。

第一段:开头

第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力

第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压

第四段:结尾

用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
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作者词汇表达丰富灵活,高级词汇使用也较熟练,要注意避免个别拼写错误;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

It is acknowledged that the level of our living quality is go downhill, particular in lagre cities. Therefore, it is hightime that we figured out the causes and took corresponding methods. The following aspects might have contributed it. Firstly, the environmental pollution makes people's living condition worse and worse,the most sever one is haze which comes from the exhaust of vehicles and the factories activities. Take Beijing for instance, yesterday the government of Beijing just called for the people not go out and realsed the red level of air pollution. Haze makes people feel uncomfortable and it is especially detrimental to our lung. Secondly, the lifestyle of us leads our health down. For example, white-colar are forming a sedentary habits and do less exercise. Similar, in other to save time, the working tend to choose the fast food instead of cooking by themselves, in this way, the would not get a balance diet and enough nutrition. Last but not least, all walks of people are under great pressure since the living expense are soaring in recent years. They have to work hard to make their ends meet which makes them have little to rest, let alone to relax or do exercise. To improve the quality of life, a comprehensive plan should be put out and the combination of the governments and the individual is one of the best ways to do so. For governments they should put more efforts into plumbing environment-friendly energy and producing more electronic cars as well as constructing a sound public transportation. As to individual, we should balance our diet and do exercise regularly. When feel under great pressure, just put the works down and go out to enjoy the nature or see a movie to let off the steam. Improving the living standards is not a solo-literal issue, but need the strength of both governments and people. Only when we take the above measures, can we create a better world.

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