题目要求:
Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解:
报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段:开头
第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力
第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压
第四段:结尾
作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者词汇基本功很好,高级词汇表达也比较恰当;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。
It is acknowledged that the level of our living standard is going downhill, particular in lagre cities. Therefore, it is high time that we figured out the causes and took corresponding methods. The following aspects might have contributed to it. Firstly, the environmental pollutions make people's living condition worse and worse and the most sever one is haze which comes from the exhaust of vehicles and burning activities. Take Beijing for instance, yesterday the government of Beijing just called for the people not go out and released the red level of air pollution. Haze makes people feel uncomfortable and it is especially detrimental to our lungs. Secondly, the lifestyle of us is harmful to our health. For example, white collars are forming a sedentary habits and do less exercise. Similar, in other to save time, the working tend to choose the fast food instead of cooking by themselves, in this way, the would not get a balanced diet and enough nutrition. Last but not least, all walks of people are under great pressure since the living expenses are soaring in recent years. They have to work hard to make their ends meet which makes them have little time to rest, let alone to relax or do exercise. To improve the quality of life, a comprehensive plan should be put out and the combination of the governments and the individual is one of the best ways to do so. For governments they should put more efforts into plumbing environment-friendly energy and producing more electronic cars as well as constructing a sound public transportation. As to individual, we should balance our diet and do exercise regularly. When we feel under great pressure, just put the works down and go out to enjoy the nature or see a movie to let off the steam. Improving the living standards is not a solo-literal issue, but need the strength of both governments and individuals. Only when we take the above measures, can we create a better world.