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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11315
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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文中衔接词丰富;能够使用一些不错的从句;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

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With the social economy growing rapidly ,more and more people have the cell and use frequently. As you can see,people play their cell phones when crossing the street,having a drink or talking with others.And then ,some syudents cheat in the exam by suing the mobile phones ,which causes bad influence .It dose not good to their studies. Moreover,many people incluing studies use the phone everyday ang paly it so late that don't sleep.As we all konw,if one's sleep quality is not good or is short of sleep ,it will be halmful to the health . Addtionally, many children too often play phones,making they spend less time communicating with thwie families,which is leading to the familise affection being light. So I'd like to call on people that don't play the phones too frequently.,to keep healthy and dood bonds with families.

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