文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词;
I have a good friend. she is a beautiful girl. she has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. her voice is better. she is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. She is also nice and often helps us . our classmates like her very much.