小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；

I have a good friend who is a very beautiful girl. She has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. Her voice is better. She is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. She is also nice and often helps us . Our classmates like her very much.