正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;文章层次较为清晰;
I have a good friend who is a very beautiful girl. She has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. Her voice is better so she is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. She is also nice and often helps us . Our classmates like her very much.