作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;全文结构较为严谨;
I have a good friend who is a very beautiful girl. She has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. Her voice is better so she is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes that reading books, playing computer games and chess. She is not also nice but also helps us . Our classmates like her very much.