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Task Direction:
You will have a choice between two Issue topics. Each topic will appear as a brief quotation that states or implies an issue of general interest. Read each topic carefully; then decide on which topic you could write a more effective and well-reasoned response.
You will have 45 minutes to plan and compose a response that presents your perspective on the topic you select. A response on any other topic will receive a zero. You are free to accept, reject, or qualify the claim made in the topic you selected, as long as the ideas you present are clearly relevant to the topic. Support your views with reasons and examples drawn from such areas as your reading, experience, observations, or academic studies.
GRE readers who are college and university faculty will read your response and evaluate its overall quality, based on how well you do the following
consider the complexities and implications of the issue
organize, develop, and express your ideas on the issue
support your ideas with relevant reasons and examples
control the elements of standard written English.
You may want to take a few minutes to think about the issue and to plan a response before you begin writing. Be sure to develop your ideas fully and organize them coherently, but leave time to reread what you have written and make any revisions that you think are necessary.
Section Direction:
Present your perspective on the issue below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views.
Question:
"At various times in the geological past, many species have become extinct as a result of natural, rather than human, processes. Thus, there is no justification for society to make extraordinary efforts, especially at a great cost in money and jobs, to save endangered species."
恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文中能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强；
In the long past history,many species,which once stayed harmonious with human on the earth.Unfortunately,some species disappeared with a natural process that was thought the choice of nature. First,the changes of living enviroment make the natural choice.During the early days of earth,the temperature and climate always varied.some species could not tolerent the hotness so that they died gradually.At last the species extincted on the earth. Second,the competition among the different species make the natatural choice.In the world,all of the species were clarified in different level.Human are the top one.As we known,one specy was feed by another specy.For example,the tiger eat some small animals,such as rabbits and horses,and they can suvived.This kinds of competiton contribute to the extinct of some weak species. To sum up,it is ordinary that many species have become extince as a result of natural process,which is the result of natural choice.
