2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；若注意部分错误，文章会更漂亮；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细；

The impact of smartphone The above picture illustrated the truth fact,which is,whatever or whenever people are using their smartphone,such as people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones,so this phenomenon is very university.I consider that if people over using cell phones is harmful,we should make use of cell phones,although they are convenience to our life. There are three reasons account for the truth fact why little use cell phone.First of all,if people over use cell phone,which has a lot of raditions and is harmful for people's health.The second place,when people always use cell phone ,they are little contact with eace other,which is not improve their emotion.Lase but not least,they can't concentrate on any things while they use cell phone. In my mind,wo should avoid over use cell phone.If we make use of it,only can we have a more life and improve myselves.