2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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this is e intrecting thing,if my pen friend visit china.the best place is Greatwall. in china,what has metion was proof that the best place to unterstand china is Greatwall. the frist reson one,the Greatwall has long history that the frist builded at Qin and form at Ming as far as various difficulties and hardshios and contains history flavar of five handred year.without a shadow of doubt the Greatwall is e good place to feel the breath of china's history.the second one, Local people from long history acquired thing not only travel money , the Greatwall making stong culture avaliable to Local people simple life but profound cultrue.no quetion that is a good place to feel chinese culture fool and people.The last one, on a account of tourism development, at the surrounding for the Greatwall,various play equipment be built up from businessmen.beyond all quetion, it is a good place to play.