2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；

The impact of smartphone The above picture illustrated the true fact,which is,whatever or whenever people are using their smartphone,such as people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones,so this phenomenon is very university.I consider that if people over using cell phones is harmful,we should make use of cell phones,although they are convenience to our life. There are three reasons account for the true fact why little use cell phone.First of all,if people over use cell phone,which has a lot of radiations and is harmful to people's health.The second place,when people always use cell phone ,they are little contact with each other,which can't improve their emotion.Lase but not least,they can't concentrate on any things while they use cell phone. In my mind,we should avoid over use cell phone.If we take advantage of it,only can we have a more life and improve myself.