2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer and Man The advent of computer has great benefit to humanbeings,but also advers mankind's lifestyle. Nowadays,mankind can't live without compputer.Working,shopping,talking,watching,all those take place in computer.In the quick world,it saves much time and offers more ralaxed time for men.However,spending much time in shopping on the Internet or woking too much time with coputer would be harm fou our health.Moreover,it's bad for our eyesight.Some adsolescent childern even thought that the world of computer is the real world. In conclusin,we should spend proper time on computer so that it can be full used and make a better life for human beings.