2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；

Computer and Man The advent of computer has great benefit to human beings,but also adverse mankind's lifestyle. Nowadays,mankind can't live without computer.Working,shopping,talking,watching,all those take place in computer.In the quick world,it saves much time and offers more relaxed time for men.However,spending much time in shopping on the Internet or woking too much time with computer would be harmful for our health.Moreover,it's bad for our eyesight.Some adolescent children even thought that the world of computer is the real world. In conclusion,we should spend proper time on computer so that it can be full used and make a better life for human beings.