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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12896
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文章层次较为清晰;作者能较多样地使用词汇,高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;

用户练习作文:

As can be seen from this part,communicate with each other on this way by internet now.Apparently,the purpose of the picture is to emphasize th importance of face-to-face contact. This is a thought-provoking picture.It is known to all that internet is a convenient communication tool. As far as I am concerned,it will make our feeling has damaged.This phenomenon has attacted widespread attention.What are the reasons for it ? I think that the reasons are as follows:To start with,a case in point is communicated something quickly.It make work more efficiency. Next use internet may could more save some cost than face-to-face. In addition,I think that there has a importance reason.That's someone don't like expression themselves in outdoor. All in all, on the one hand the internet has its good aspect.On the other hand,we have to face-to-face contact in some aspect.

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