2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；

With the development of science,now,more and more people have their own mobile phone.However,with the improvement of the mobile phone,many persons prefer seeing mobile phone to seeing this beautiful world.People are even crossing the street with looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see. Why more and more people like seeing cell phone?I think,one of the most important reasons is that the functions of phones are improving step by step.And most people think these functions are very interesting. However,using too much mobile phones are not beneficial.If we use it too much,we may not withdraw from it.Also,phones may not be good at our eyes. So,forgive your phones,and make you see this beautiful world,you must find many more interesting things.