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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(93):游客可付费在仿造长城上涂写留言

发布时间:2015-04-30 10:28浏览次数:3969
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For about 120 dollars, visitors to China’s Great Wall can now leave their mark on a fake (仿造) wall built recently in the name of preventing graffiti (乱画) on the real structure.
The management office of the Juyongguan section of the Great Wall in Beijing built the fake wall and will charge 999 yuan for carvings on each brick, daily newspaper The First reported.
  With 9,999 bricks available, the marble structure could help management earn 9.9 million yuan. Juyongguan’s management said they were hoping to satisfy visitor’s desire to leave something behind—usually their name or words of love—while discouraging them form caving graffiti on China’s best-known cultural relic.
The Great Wall, which receives four million visitors a year, has suffered greatly from graffiti. But the project has come under some criticism with The First citing (引用) one expert as saying many schemes to ‘protect’ the wall are actually aimed at getting profits from the cultural treasure.
The fake wall is located near the most-visited section of the real wall in Badaling and visitors usually travel to Juyongguan on their way to Badaling.
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行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;若注意一些语法错误,文章会更漂亮;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意;

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Recently,the visitors can leave their marks in a fake wall after costing 120 dollars in the name of preventing graffiti on the real structure.in my opinion , I think this action is useful and meaningful.Many times ,when I travelling in some places of interest,I Will see some people graffiti on some old structures ,trees or walls. That's really bad behaviours. Therefore,I think gaving visitors a chance to leave their marks on a fake structure is a wonderful method .in this way , there will be less hurt on some meaningful old things.And,there will be more people can have chances to see some rare views,isn't it a exciting thing. But the most important thing that we need to do to protect old things is to increase the public's protecting thinking,then those oldand good things will gain better protects.

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