行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;若注意一些语法错误,文章会更漂亮;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意;
Recently,the visitors can leave their marks in a fake wall after costing 120 dollars in the name of preventing graffiti on the real structure.in my opinion , I think this action is useful and meaningful.Many times ,when I travelling in some places of interest,I Will see some people graffiti on some old structures ,trees or walls. That's really bad behaviours. Therefore,I think gaving visitors a chance to leave their marks on a fake structure is a wonderful method .in this way , there will be less hurt on some meaningful old things.And,there will be more people can have chances to see some rare views,isn't it a exciting thing. But the most important thing that we need to do to protect old things is to increase the public's protecting thinking,then those oldand good things will gain better protects.
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