作者使用词汇表达不都灵魂,需要多使用一些高级词汇;文章层次较为清晰;文中句子偏简单,可增加从句使用量;
Hello, every body, firstly let me to introduce myself. My name is Zack, I come from china And come here for English study. The theme of My lecture is describe my teacher. so next let me talk about my teacher. My teacher is a beautiful lady and she is tall. The most important of all she is elegants. She so patient to guide me in the long studying load. In my heart she is my goddess. In fact, in the other hand of lief, she is my best friend. I can get help from her when I feel bad. I hope my teacher can be my friend forever. Thank you.