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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8978[网页划词已开启]
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分59.5分
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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;丰富从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查;

用户练习作文:

As we all know,there is a saying goes that:don't judge a person by their appearance.Indeedly,we could not just by a person's surface to understand of it's intension. Such as when we meet a differicult things,we should analysis of the totals. On the other hand,whenever we deal with anythings,for example,your classmates decide to take part in activity,and your all think he looks ugly and the the mouth is also not fiexible,all make a bet think he can't win.But the fact is not this,he not only win the game,but also being recognized by most people.that'a make us surprise. From this things,I no more judge a person by their appearance,because I understand anyone have it's sparkle ,we all from him by knowledges.

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