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Directions: Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument.
The following appeared in the Sherwood Times newspaper.
“A recent study reported that pet owners have longer, healthier lives on average than do people who own no pets. Specifically, dog owners tend to have a lower incidence of heart disease. In light of these findings, Sherwood Hospital should form a partnership with Sherwood Animal Shelter to institute an ‘adopt-a-dog' program. The program would encourage dog ownership for patients recovering from heart disease, which will help reduce medical costs by reducing the number of these patients needing ongoing treatment. In addition, the publicity about the program will encourage more people to adopt pets from the shelter, which will reduce the risk of heart disease in the general population.”
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companying is helpful for living a health life.A recent study reported that pet owners have longer,healthier lives on average than do people who own no pets.I think that some reasons may be explained for the phenomine. First,a partnership could bring a smooth emotion.It is obvious that some people who is alone may stay unhappy and in a low mood.He or she may seldom talk or laugh,which contribute to a low emotion.Once it last a long time,diseases may be existed. Second,a partnership could cost time and energy.if someone feed a little dog,he or she must prepare food for the pet.playing games with the pet should be done always.the pet owner apparently spent much time on looking after the pet,but much more happiness would got fromit.Meanwhile,the owner may get excises during preparing. To sum up,there are much more merits of a partnership .It is help to reduce risk of suffering heart diseases.
