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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9025
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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文中词汇表达较恰当,高级词汇表达灵活;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;文章层次较为清晰;

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The famous saying " The significance of life is abve its width rather than its length"places a high value on the importance of considering matters from how to live a meaningful life.Showing the necessity of enhancing our awareness of the A case in point is our life goal.There is no denying in saying that without a series of life goals, we would not achieve anything great in our personal growth and live a meaningful life. We must pay attention to all make advantage of our life instead of idle our precious time. It is not too much to say that considering matters from all aspects and achieve goals plays an indispensable role in our life. In order to enhance our awareness of from all aspects. It is necessary that we attach great importance to the action of making money and happiness. From my perspective,the role played by this quality can never be overemphasized .And as college students. it is high time that we paid colse attention to it.

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