2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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According to the above of form,we can draw a conclusion that higer eduacted degree will lead to a lower unemployment rate.Maybe there are some rules.As we all see,a person's weekly earnings in 2011 is 1551 when he get a doctoral degree,which is much higer than average.On the contrary,it's unemployment is two point five percent. To begin with,what to bring if we have a great degree?Knowledge,platform,or view.Nobody believe that a person can succeed in a simple way.Of course,In roder to get a higer earnings is not only acquire a advancd diploma.